WHITE
White is the majestic swans that are lazy
White is the snow that sparkles like crazy.
White is the daisies that fill me with wonder
White is the bright banging thunder.
White is the clouds that bounce along the sky
White is the people that are my allies.
White is the white walkers from the game of thrones
White is the colour of my bones.
I like white because it is common.
Bonjour Lauren,I really liked how you described all the things that were white it reminds me of when it was snowing one thing I think you should work on is giving it a more exciting title instead of
ReplyDeletewhite because it might not attract people.
thanks shelby i really appreciate that
DeleteHi Lauren,i really liked how you came up with a lot of rhyming words in your poem.Maybe next time you could try making a creative title.
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ReplyDeleteHey Lauren :)
ReplyDeleteThis is Jade C from the Summer Learning Journey 2017-2018. I will be blogging with you this summer! I hope you are having a wonderful time with your friends and your family!
It's nearly Christmas and your descriptive writing about the colour 'white' made me think of the snow! Countries like England and America will be able to spend white Christmas. White Christmas is when there is snow in Christmas and everything is covered in white. Did you ever wish that there was snow during Christmas time in New Zealand as well?
I would love to read and comment on your posts! To help you get started with blogging this summer, I have included the link to our Summer Learning Journey activities list.
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities
Let's go on the Summer Learning Journey together!
All the best,
Jade C.