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Tuesday, 22 August 2017

WALT: To write an interesting poem about our own Family.



Majestic Family

My family is weird but awesome!!!

Wherever my bookworm Sister is, she is reading a Game of Thrones book.

My busy Mum is always at work dealing with smelly babies and rude teenagers.

My tired Dad is so stressed when he is picking me up from Oscar and the traffic is horrible!

My Cat is the most majestic out of all of us, she is known for sleeping by the heater!

The great thing about my family is that we love each other.

2 comments:

  1. Hey,Lauren I realy liked your doc it is amazing and it is funny have you watched the game of thrones? And next time you should work on is be more Specific about the family and more information and also details

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  2. Hey Lauren,
    Your poem is very cool and I liked how you described your sister as a book worm and that she loves reading game of thrones. (I'm a bit of a book worm too) anyway, you did a good job with your poem but maybe next time add some pictures or add some colour to make it a bit better but overall you did an awesome job with your work and make good progress!

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