Fatal Accident!
On the twenty-fourth of march 2019,
Pig the selfish pug fell out of a window.
Pig the selfish pug fell out of a window.
Pig’s brother, Trevor wanted to play with Pigs toys,
but Pig wouldn’t share.
but Pig wouldn’t share.
Is that the truth though… Or is it lies.
Trevor's Statement:
“My brother kept piling on the toys.
Piling and piling. He climbed onto the top and bowed.
Then, the Tower of Toys swung this way, and swung that way.
Next thing I know he was out the window! I tried to warn him,
I really did. But he fell and his body was turned inside out”.
Piling and piling. He climbed onto the top and bowed.
Then, the Tower of Toys swung this way, and swung that way.
Next thing I know he was out the window! I tried to warn him,
I really did. But he fell and his body was turned inside out”.
Pigs Statement:
“H-he pushed me.” Pig whimpered.
“He stuck his claw out and tapped it on one of my toys,
it’s HIS fault I’m like this!”
“He stuck his claw out and tapped it on one of my toys,
it’s HIS fault I’m like this!”
Who do we believe and who don’t we believe.
Reporter,
Kelly-Anne is going to interview Joyce McHale and Greg McHale,
the parents of Pig and Trevor.
Their statements:
Kelly-Anne is going to interview Joyce McHale and Greg McHale,
the parents of Pig and Trevor.
Their statements:
“We were shocked and terrified when we found out t
hat Pig had fallen and had been broken inside and out.
But Trevor wouldn’t do that, surely! He’s the nicest dog ever.
I don’t know how to explain it. Me and Greg were at work.
All we know is as much as you guys.” Joyce finished speaking.
hat Pig had fallen and had been broken inside and out.
But Trevor wouldn’t do that, surely! He’s the nicest dog ever.
I don’t know how to explain it. Me and Greg were at work.
All we know is as much as you guys.” Joyce finished speaking.
Greg didn’t want to say anything.
Until the police found out more, the case is closed!
Author of: Lauren Dreaver
Hey Lauren,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your story. I liked that you included the owners and interviewed Trevor in such detail. You explained what happened snappy and quick(that is a good thing). Next time you could use less descriptive words and cut straight to the point. Other than that, You did very well. Keep up the great work!
From Nevaeh
Thanks Nevaeh! I'll try do that. :)
ReplyDeleteHi Lauren.
ReplyDeleteI liked your article. I found your detail interesting. I would like to know the outcome of the investigation.
Looking forward to reading more of your blogs.
Love Mum
Thank you mum! xo
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