Wonderful winter
For winter is the time of year for day-dreaming of wonderful things. The snowflakes fall, you freeze outside,the bunnies squeak, the sun leaves the sky. I miss summer, autumn was fine. The ice shimmers before my eyes. But what I miss the most is the sweet taste of ice-cream saturating my tongue. Winter is a wonderland.
Hi Lauren it's Antonette from you class! I really liked the way you ended your poem with a positive note and called Winter a wonderland!. Maybe next time you could put lease snowflakes. But over all it was AMAZING!
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